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The Capitolist
Saturday, 9 April 2005
El Ladron del Amor review & critique

A brief review & critique by David Skinner, both
Doublethink Master and Galley Slave.


"Thanks for the short-short story. I like several of your sentences, esp
'he
blew me off, blew out some lingering smoke, and blew up the stairs . . . '
The point of view strikes me as a little unstable since he is both
worshiper
and victim of the Spanish prince. Why not..."

Continued at:

El Ladron Del Amor

If you want to see what happens, email me at:
ben5@pobox.com

Posted by bwv at 4:58 PM EDT
Updated: Saturday, 9 April 2005 5:38 PM EDT

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